Tuesday, March 4, 2014

The Beginning; A Story's Spoilers

  I've decided to write a story. But before I do I want to do the "Spoilers" about it. Just some simple history on the whole Universe that the story takes place in. If you want to read the story but don't want to hear about the Spoilers then DON'T CONTINUE READING. Thank you.



A world made up of Shadows consumed the First Existing Being. It was a female, alien and distorted like the First World. She floated in emptiness, she wasn't alive nor was she dead. She was non-existent mentally but physically she had a body. Made up of black-matter and wisps of Pure Aura. She floated in the Shadows before the Occurrence came. And when the Occurrence came she was alive. Her mind was slow at first but as she began to become aware of her talents she was able to move about freely. All though unsure what her purpose was or why she was even present in nothing but the Shadows she decided to explore. And as she explored she came across an urn. It was made from an unphysical material and it wasn't decorated. It was a plain urn filled with contents that peaked her curiosity. She reached down and grasped the urn. At her touch the urn evaporated. Without the emotions of sorrow or confusion she decided to proceed further on.  She crept though the Shadows until she came across another object. It was a wisp of  Pure Aura. She stared at it with curiosity and watched it move about. She watched it for a long time until at last the wisp stopped, it seemed to be staring back at her. And so she slowly crept towards it grasping at it. Once her hands touched the wisp it fused with her body giving her pain. She then began to cry, crying tears of fire. She had experienced pain. And it was the pain of childbirth. At the moment she touched the wisp it instantly passed through her body and came out as a child. The child was strange to her. Its skin was different then hers and it was just alien. She had never experienced anything like this yet. Little did she know she was experiencing color. She was looking at a creature with rich black skin. Its face was also odd. The creature had a nose like her and eyes like empty pits filled with Pure Aura. But it had what is known as a mouth, the lips a lighter black. The creature stared at her with wonder on who it had come into a world without an understanding of why it was here. Strangely, the creature also had the urn from earlier in its hands. It reached inside, curiously, and grasped at its contents. Pulling out more Pure Aura It began to play with it. As It did a shape was made from the Aura. It was a shape similar to It's mother but one thing made it different. It could be defined as a female and had a mouth. And then the creature began to animate. Moving about slowly as if stiff. Her body was glowing with color, a rich white distorting the Shadows. The creature decided to give his creation a name without reason. It called her Light. And Light was lonely so she asked her creator to use more Pure Aura to create another creature. And thus It created a being similar to Itself. And unlike Itself  it could be defined as a male. And then the creature began to animate as well. And with another sudden urge to name the creature Darkness. And Darkness emitted a much darker vibe then the Shadows. His body a dark black, darker then his creator. Together Light and Darkness watched their creator grow. He grew about half the size of his mother but quicker. His children soon began to grow a short while after. And as the grew they began to experience new emotions. One emotion more powerful than anything before, it was Love. Yinzarus(Yin-Zar-Us); have giving himself a name decided to split his creations apart from each other. He banished Darkness beneath him and Light above him. Then with his newfound strength created a barrier to separate them. However, the barrier wouldn't last long. Light and Darkness began to become depressed. And as they developed more depression they found strength. And together they worked together to break the barrier that separated themselves. When they finally broke it there was a sudden impact. The impact released all the Pure Aura and it absorbed them as well as Yinzarus. As the chaos settled down their prison began to take shape into a sphere colored grey. As it rested in Shadows the First Being now known as Celeste began to create something magnificent. It was Fire. She released the Fire into the Shadows and it soon began to swirl around the prison. The fire released gases. The gases then began to turn into breathable Air, and the air then began to form an atmosphere around the Prison and the fire. Next Celeste created Water which flowed freely in the atmosphere. The water occasionally interfering with the wind and fire. Meanwhile in the Prison Yinzarus died and his body and spirit left the Prison. But Light and Darkness remained inside, loving each other all the way through. They loved each other so much that they began to mate and soon eggs were being created, hosting children inside. At the same time the fire and waters began to take physical form. Spawning as feathered Dragons and scaly Leviathans. Enraged by the past chaos the Dragons began attacking the Leviathans. And in retaliation the Leviathans struck back. As the two species fought the Dragons began to die off. Their bodies turning into rock by the touch of water. And they then died creating small shards of rock. During this event the winds began to envelope the rocks making more atmospheres. Later on what were now planets began to change. The earth having developed over time were blessed with the dying life force of the Dragons creating a new species. The Golems. These creatures also inheriting the hate for Leviathans began to attack them with crystals that had grown on their backs and hands. The Leviathans seeing the threat fled from the inhabited worlds and created worlds made entirely of water. And there they lived, meanwhile, the Dragons seeing no further threat retired in the upper realms of their environment. There they created their own empire. The first empire and began developing the first weaponry, languages, buildings, and culture. As well, the Golems began making their own empire underground focusing on mining. As for the Leviathans. They also had the same idea and began advancing in an empire of technology. Everything seemed peaceful until the Prison that contained Light and Darkness began to break. As it did another impact occurred. Light and Darkness's physical forms began to spread out and create rings. The rings protected their eggs that were now globes of light or darkness. There were thirty-one eggs and overtime they turned solid again and each egg was a different shade of grey. However, there was one egg out of the thirty-one that was different. It rested in the center of the rings and was made of Pure Aura. It provided warmth for the surrounding offspring. And while the eggs developed Celeste was creating two new beings. She named one Mythos whom was a male and the other a female; Legarious (Le-gar-i-us). She commanded them to watch over the Dragons, Leviathans, and Golems so that she may rest. And they did as they were told, watching the creatures as they developed their cultures. And as they studied the creatures they saw something magnificent and alien born. It was the first real Magic ever. The Dragons created what they called Fire Magic, the Leviathans;Water Magic, and the Golems; Earth magic. As the creatures evolved they passed on their magic to their offspring and all seemed fine. But, eventually something would go wrong. And it happened in the realm of the Dragons. The eldest Dragon, also the first Dragon; Father Drake, was having trouble with his empire. The Dragons had created the strongest army ever. And they wanted to prove it by striking down the Leviathans and Golems. But when Father Drake refused they began to disobey their king and enraged the Leviathans. This was the start of the Hundred-Year-War. Throughout the battle many Leviathans, Dragons, and the occasional Golem perished. More worlds were created from the bodies of the fallen. And eventually; Father Drake seeing he would loose sooner or later he decided to create his own Judgment Day. Casting all of his life force into the Eternal Flame he made it self-destruct consuming the Dragons, killing them all and hiding their World in fire. Meanwhile the Leviathans were weakened by the power of the Eternal Flame and many began to slumber. As for the Golems, they continued to build up their Empire. During the Hundred-Year-War the eggs had fully developed. Every egg but the middle one began to hatch. Releasing winged beings with the shape of their parents. Soon  after their birth they began to grow and develop. During their growing period which lasted only for an hour of time they had began to talk to their parents. All though Light and Darkness didn't have physical forms they existed as sound in the Heavens. They communicated with their children and welcomed them to the world. As they listened to their parent's stories they became aware that if they wanted to survive they'd have to make themselves a home. But not just any home, a home to protect the odd egg that hadn't hatched. So they got to work. They created a garden around the egg, sinking it in a lake made of Pure Aura. Then they created a complex city of towers, houses, and other buildings around the garden. The city was built upon a mountain with the garden on top. Soon after the city was made their parents gave them names based on their abilities. Their names were also based upon their attitudes  towards good and evil, as well as the color of their egg. And so they were named; Death. Whom was a winged skeleton, Mortalus (Mortal-Us) a male-human with Black wings, Dralos (Dray-Los) a female-dragon with purple skin and wings made of mirrors shards. Forge; a muscular winged man with red skin, eyes or fire, and brown facial hair. The other beings whom called themselves the Immortals all lived together in the city. That was until the egg began to hatch....


 
 
 
((I've finished for now, sorry I had to cut the Immortal names short. I don't have them all planned out yet and I don't want to spoil the surprise. But I do hope you enjoy my story coming up possible later tonight.)) ~

~Sincerely, Umbra...

2 comments:

  1. That was AMAZING!! Was a little confused on the characters but, none the less, it was an amazing story great job!! - Sean Shadowflame

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  2. :D love it :D keep up the great work

    ~Arthur

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